Ahh hun i haven't been on this for ages, first thing i do, check your poems and your still an amazing writer. This poem was so visual. You just describe the pain-not even the right word- so perfectly.
I hope you are well.
Miss you lots.
xox

Wow, this is a powerful poem. I was hooked just by the first sentence; very good. Strong, fluid, oozing raw emotion with every word. A great write.

Smiles,
N*