Best friends???

by El   Apr 10, 2008


My whole life is going wrong
I'm finding it hard to carry on
You're making me change into what I don't want to be
Just because I want you to be friends with me

You know I can't live without you
So I will do whatever you want me to
You to me are the only one
Without you I'm left with none

When you leave me it makes me want to cry
And I sit here, just wanting to die
I just don't know what to do
You've got me hooked onto you

You led me to believe you were my friend
But thats not how it looks in the end
Its just like before, all over again
All the tears and all the pain

And in the end its just me and the knife
While you carry on and live your life
I thought you were different from the rest
I thought you would be the best

The best friend from my dreams
But now the jokes on me it seems
You will pretend I was never you're friend
And thats how this story is going to end

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    I really like this poem it's sad though
    My favorite lines are

    "I thought you were different from the rest
    I thought you would be the best"

    I felt that way about my "ex" best friend
    She said she was just using me to get to some boy
    Not very cool...
    I also LOVE the last stanza it's great
    Great poem all together<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Mya

    I thought it was cool. i liked it. and its so true some people do pretend that the friendship you had with them never happened. but I'm giving u a 4/5 bcuz i don't get what u said when in the first stanza "Just because I want to be friends with me" are you talking about your self or someone else.

  • 16 years ago

    by Needer of You

    I think the rhymes flowed a bit. But it sounds like you've been trying to force the rhyme a little. If you didn't force the rhymes, this poem would be a lot better.

    But, keep on working! You might find a strategy to rhyme the words, yet make it flow easily and naturally.

    Keep on writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    I really liked your poem i've added this to my favorites!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissy0590

    Wow..... I mean wow is ther another way to describe it

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