Comments : Shadow of my past

  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    I'll take the blame this time
    i know i pushed you away
    my shame of the past came
    back so fast,i couldn't even
    stop to think what i was doing.

    wow the beginning of this poem caught me intrested so fast i wanted to read more

    now this made the poem very very sad

    you loved me with your heart,but now
    I've torn it all apart.It wasn't you
    i swear on my grave it was the
    one before.He broke my spirit and burned
    my soul.If you were so different i swear i
    didn't know.I know it wont be the same
    and i know I'm the one you blame.

    the second stanza kissed off the first

    the rest was followed brilliant loved the tie on each stanza 5/5