Freeze It

by Indian Comma Bean   Apr 11, 2008


Frozen; Stop! Rewind!
Static; Wait! What?
I thought I saw something...
I thought I saw you...

Freeze frame to see the truth,
Rewind it back to catch the fluke.
See yourself? It's you; But isn't it?
Or is it not who you'd like to see?

Actions filmed in the new HD,
Caught on tape by my High Detection; Eyes,
A new recording that catches perfection;
At it's best; Ha! Perfection, You'd like that.

A Foul mouth complimented by a dirty tongue,
With teeth that shine so bright,
You'd think a person like you
Would love to breathe; Freely, Freeze.

Frozen; Stop! Rewind!
Static; Wait! What?
I thought I saw something...
Never mind, I don't know you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Ooh I do enjoy this. Its youthful and energetic. The quick pace makes it fun to read but the "stuff" inside is deep and intellectual.

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