It seems like it was a very hard poem to write. its very sad and i can feel the pain you're feeling. i wish u didn't feel like this :(

"The world keeps marching on
and I keep standing still
Time keeps melting away
and so does my living will"

^great ending but i don't like u saying things like that. we all want u living. i promise!!! if u need to talk PM me...cheer up! :)

5/5

This is a wonderful, heartwarming poem.

The words were really powerful. I hope the poem isn't based on your life. We all want you living, We, readers don't want you to go. Take the courage to continue writing poems. I hope you the best.

Best wishes,

Sarah A.

Wow, no this really is amazing!

Totally disagree, this poem WAS amazing, you did awsome!