This was very beautiful and unique. i loved it although i'm not quite sure i completely understood it...but the fact that it's a bit hard to understand makes it that much better.

this stanza was beautiful and it flowed perfectly...

"Diamonds are falling down,
The ground glimmers like your lips,
Slicing my arms, the skin, it rips."

i also liked the ending. 5/5

I love it, its beautiful.

the stanza:

Oh baby, diamonds are falling,
Hear the sound of my voice, its calling,
I never neglect, flawless complexion.

is my favorite. great poem

Ah, wow. all of your poetry completely knocks me out, it's so refreshing. I love all of the comparisons you used in this, it was beautiful.
As soon as I read this:
"The ground glimmers like your lips,
Slicing my arms, the skin, it rips."
I was completely hooked. A flawless piece(: