by Ares Apr 11, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I got a knife in my back, |
by neo
You are the best poet love :) |
I think this is pretty good! It's got its weird moments, but all in all, you're effective at getting the reader to feel the dismay and shock of the father...great job, I love your stories! |
by Goodbye
Nice poem. I can see you like to write these mafia poems and you are good at it. :) |