Silence
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX Apr 11, 2008
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I wait in the Shadow of my childhood wait for the pain to stop i watch my whole world came crash down all around me. it wont go away the crying the screaming is so great my ear are bleeding from the sound of there pain i feel there pain all the time i can't but help myself not to cry for there soul to be lost to the darkness of this world. wait in the silence there is no movement just silence. wait for another Hymen person voice to hear but i hear nothing but silence i see death all around me it's near the end of me braking point of it all to come crashing down.... |
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16 years ago
by rebecca
Your really good at your poems
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16 years ago
I like how u expressed the whole image...It was really touchable..keep it up 5/5
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16 years ago
by william
Powerful emotions. i understand them. unfortunatly i cant add a voice to my words 4 u. hope the words rev enough
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16 years ago
by Lonely Rider
Great write...
"but i hear nothing but silence i see death all around me it's near the end of me braking point of it all to come crashing down.... "
^^ i could feel the pain inside... great description...
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16 years ago
by Royal
I Like the torment that I was visualizing as I read this poem. It made me think of the childhood troubles that we all encounter. This is the type of poem that makes you think of everything painfull thing that happens. I like how you pointed out the intensisty of the screams and the silence. Overall great job. I will be posting soon I just need to find the time.
