Wow i love this. its scarry that are world can be that insetative....amazing 5/5

The screaming is so great my ear are bleeding from the sound of there
GREAT LINE 5/5

I Like the torment that I was visualizing as I read this poem. It made me think of the childhood troubles that we all encounter. This is the type of poem that makes you think of everything painfull thing that happens. I like how you pointed out the intensisty of the screams and the silence. Overall great job. I will be posting soon I just need to find the time.

Great write...

"but i hear nothing but silence i see death all around me it's near the end of me braking point of it all to come crashing down.... "

^^ i could feel the pain inside... great description...

good work...

Powerful emotions. i understand them. unfortunatly i cant add a voice to my words 4 u. hope the words rev enough

I like how u expressed the whole image...It was really touchable..keep it up 5/5

Your really good at your poems