There is something about this poem more unique than any of the ones i read so far from you. your style of writing is completely different. it has a meaning to it that is quite different from your other ones. and you seem very sincere as if your being honest to yourself convincing yourself of your feelings. there something about this poem that makes it seem like its true. that this really happened. yet im not sure if it did though. so did it?

This is unbelievably amazing, the imagery in this was incredible, not to pry but i was wondering if this really happened to you? it's happened to me(not this specifically but you catch my drift) amazing... truly amazing... i'm speechless, 5/5

Um, no actually. none of its true other than the type of soap. i go out of the shower one night and i liked the way the soap smelled. lol. i guess thats stupid, but thats how it came about.

--TheGothicAlbino

The style of this is terrific, this entire piece is stunning. I absolutely love this. Emotion and story run the show here. The word choice is thought out well because if not for that, you would not have the emotion and the flow that is the whole, technical aspect, of this piece's strength. Overall however this piece is magnificent. I can see nothing wrong with it, nor do I wish to find something. Excellent job. 5/5

Saddened light
pours in the window.
Above the scent of
black raspberry vanilla
soap, floats an aroma that arouses
both senses and memory;
pizza, fresh, homemade.

I love this ^^ section of the piece. It is so filled with imagery and description and I believe it is a terrific way to transition from the beginning into the piece itself.

My shamed face cupped
in clenched hands,
all thoughts of love, of him,
pushed aside.
I climb the winding staircase
ascending to familiar loneliness,
to another hollow room.
How foolish
I had been
and always would I be.

^^Is the best ending I have seen to a poem in a long time.