Wonderfully well done, could be sent as a condolece card

This poem is amazing and I love it for I have just lost someone special a few months ago and this poem brings tears to my eyes thanks for sharing it with us. 5/5

Tammi,

Wonderful idea for a poem for the dead. I had a similar concept type poem written about my brother who died of leukemia when I was about 5. You did a wonderful job on this poem, it brought back memories... the good kind. :)

I really liked this poem. It's meaningful and has a nice rhythm. Full of emotions and well constructed. Well done!

Very very good poem, I really liked it! keep up the good work Cat. Love you
Arun.