Comments : Who am I?

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    So many ppl are faced with this question
    you worded it so well though
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Mm awesome. i can definitely relate. these short lines describe contradictions of personality so well. i really love the idea of asking "who am I?" as i think everyone asks themselves theis question at some point of their lives. and so great you expressed this in a poem! the last part is my favoutite. it finishes the poem brilliantly.
    i usually love rhymed poems but this one is an exception for me. great write!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I'm the girl
    who cares
    too much
    yet is convinced
    she's selfish
    [because they
    told her so]

    my favorite stanza you have so much emotion in it and i can relate so well
    great wording and composition 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lulu

    I relly lik ur poem its very good
    c/b
    Loka