by Lu
He sat rocking, slowly back and forth |
This is awesome. I was there somewhere in the picture for sure as i felt this all happening right in front of my eyes. And i smiled in the end too. |
by Ingrid
Deana, |
by debbylyn
Beautiful Deana.....I believe it captures a perfect snapshot of old/ vs young.....excellent imagery....I can picture the old country homestead and the grandpa...reminds me of WV....lol |
by Elapsed
Growing old is never an easy thing, watching life pass us by hoping that the ones we love remember us. This was a beautiful piece from you, such a heartfelt read that reminded me of my grand parents.. wonderful job!! |
by Cindy
Deana |
by Mike Martin
This is just sooooooooo great!!!!!!!! It got me a tear or 2, maybe 3 or 4.but it was sooooo very good.....You did a wonderful job on this...I cant say enough.you touched my heart and i'm glad..Great work!!!!!5/5......xoxoxo |
by shobhana kumar
This is a very beautiful piece of work. So true, of bonds that tie one down, no matter how old. |
by Cindy
Deana |
by debbylyn
Congrats on winning the weekly contest! |
by Rachel RTVW
A beautifully penned reflective free verse. Gives the reader a sense of mixed emotions. Good flow and storyline. |
by Lu
Congrats on your win Deana ... a well deserved win my friend! |
by Cody
That is an awsome poem. usually I gravitate towards the rhyming ones, but this one kept me hooked. Its a great poem. And congrats on spreading your wings into new types of poetry. You did VERY well. 5/5 deffinetly. |
I just lost my Grandad, who was also a Great Grandad. This really touched me. And while I often comment, I never vote. But you're getting a vote. Very little poetry on here moves me like this did. |
by Unamed
Wow!!..great job!!!..lots of emotion, it was nice!1..i can see why this poem won!!..great job! |
by Wishmaster
That is THE most inpriational poem ive read |