Batteries Not Included

Different.. but in a good way. it short and sorta spunky in it's own way. i like it. keep it up. ~KM~

I like this one too...man your a hecka good writter

This free verse has a great flow delivering a very deep truth

I like it! Could have been a little longer but still really good!! 5/5

It took me a few re-readings of this poem to finally get at what you were trying to get across but that's just me. I'm slow so don't be offended. Anywho, such a short poem with such basic, common words yet it was indescribable. A well deserved 5/5!
~Stefanie