Black Rose

by AlexTheLion11   Apr 12, 2008


I wish she were mine,

This girl of my dreams.

But being friends,

Is all that it seems.

To prove that I'm worthy,

To prove that I'm right.

To mean that one day,

Our love might ignite?

But for now it lay still,

In between two thick walls.

There's things in the way,

And it makes the rain, fall.

But in the dark of the night,

It steadily grows-

So beautiful.. yet cautious,

Just like a black rose.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is beautiful. You do not suck at poetry. Just give yourself time to grow. But anywho i loved this, Great imagery and flow. Keep it up hun. Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    I absolutely love this poem...
    this reminds me so much of how I fell in love with my best friend...
    needless to say it didnt work out.
    Anyways...
    amazing job on the poem.
    Keep writing, you're awesome :D
    Keep it up.
    Peace :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Alexander You are a frikkin amazazing poem writer!!

    ALWAYS & FOREVER
    Natalie

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