Requiem Of A Cursed Soul

by LitxUpxWithxLife   Apr 12, 2008


My bright brown eyes darken to black.
And my fast beating heart starts to slack.
The life once inside, leaves me in a crimson rush.
And the once loud sounds, begins to hush.
But she catches the blood that flows from my neck.
Stilling my heart and chilling my blood with one small peck
Now the curse she gave, averts me from the sun.
I am one with the dark and immortality has been won.
A vampire, I am now and forever forth will be,
Dead to the world, that no mirror can see.
My body thirsts for the blood that brings life.
The blood that is drained and spilled by a knife.
A bloody thirsty cry, calls out from my heart.
This is not what I wanted, not even to start.
My cursed soul does weep and tear.
poured into the tune for all to hear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    All of these dark poems seem to have ramantic overtones. Dark passion is passion that burns the soul and drains the heart as this poem reflects so well

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow. Your poems contain a lot of imagery . . . Which is very interesting and caught my attention from the start. They are full of rhymes, imagery, great word choice. I think you write more with the dark & fantasy.. I think it would be interesting to hear something of yours that had to do with love or friendship. Maybe even funny. :) I don't really enjoy the deep, dark, poems all that much.. However they bring out more emotions. It was a great poem again and I looove the rhyming and the flow. Imagery is extrordinary [sp?]. Great work. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I normally do not like to read dark poetry, but you have done a wonderful job with this.

    I like the fact that you gave just enough details to keep the reader drawn in and not so much that it scares them away.

    You have a way of painting with words that allow the imagination to see all.

    Well done

    ~~Sher

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