I normally do not like to read dark poetry, but you have done a wonderful job with this.

I like the fact that you gave just enough details to keep the reader drawn in and not so much that it scares them away.

You have a way of painting with words that allow the imagination to see all.

Well done

~~Sher

Wow. Your poems contain a lot of imagery . . . Which is very interesting and caught my attention from the start. They are full of rhymes, imagery, great word choice. I think you write more with the dark & fantasy.. I think it would be interesting to hear something of yours that had to do with love or friendship. Maybe even funny. :) I don't really enjoy the deep, dark, poems all that much.. However they bring out more emotions. It was a great poem again and I looove the rhyming and the flow. Imagery is extrordinary [sp?]. Great work. Keep it up.

All of these dark poems seem to have ramantic overtones. Dark passion is passion that burns the soul and drains the heart as this poem reflects so well