by shadow Apr 12, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The sky rips open as rain falls from its hole |
by dante
A plunge into darkness to find the light? interesting, and VERY good. keep it up |
by Diva the Chiropteran Queen and a Brokencyde and a Twilight Fan
Whoa...sweet...i could see that in my head man!!! keep up the awesome work!! and you have awesome talent! 5/5 |
There is such ' excruciating feeling' in your words. Your expression is profound. ..Yet..there is light at the end of the tunnel. |
by Maddyxxx
:O omg I envy you lol. I really loved this. deff 5/5 felt everything,and it let my mind visualize this. :) |
That was amazing. I like how you give hope at the end of the poem, it made me think of how their is always hope in even the darkest of places. Good job. |