That was amazing. I like how you give hope at the end of the poem, it made me think of how their is always hope in even the darkest of places. Good job.

:O omg I envy you lol. I really loved this. deff 5/5 felt everything,and it let my mind visualize this. :)

There is such ' excruciating feeling' in your words. Your expression is profound. ..Yet..there is light at the end of the tunnel.
Novice

Whoa...sweet...i could see that in my head man!!! keep up the awesome work!! and you have awesome talent! 5/5

A plunge into darkness to find the light? interesting, and VERY good. keep it up