thats a 5 for sure, that poem hits home for me especialy because my biological mother lost all five of us kid to the state, because of you addiction to drugs, mainly coke. that sh@t will screw up your body, your mind, your family unitity, and then some. so take heed and stay away. thx for a great read.

Randy

typo's above,

kid should be kids

you should be her

Thnx for the comments you guys...It's a really great feeling knowing that some of you can relate to what i'm saying, and even if you can't, that you know how badly coke can screw you over.
I'm sorry that you didn't like it question mark guy...I think you are too concerned with your views to notice anyone elses and you need to open up your mind a bit, but its always nice to hear the negative comments with the positive ones.
Thanks again for voting and commenting, keep it up!
Luv,

-Blue ^_~

5 for u gurlo... hope u can visit mine ... btw... nice poem... lucifer right... weed is good, just know ur limitations... too much of that can surely pin ya down... (LOL) wink* u know what i mean =) haha... ciao gurlo

eY! good poem, it waZ realli sad but hopefullY will reach out to ppl! keep up da good work!
-MwAz-
StephyG

well..... this reminds me of exactly why i want my boyfriend to stop smoking.... i dont smoke so i dont know how it really affects someone.... and that scares me.... he says that hes not a druggy and hes not addicted, that he just likes smoking.... but even thought i trust every word he says and i trust him with my life... i dont trust him with his own... he thinks hes not that important and all of that stuff.... im lost about so many things right now i just dont know how to fix it....:(
loves and hugs
Manda Lynn

Heyy i really like this girl. i ahve never done anything other than weed but i have thought about it and i think this poem is gonna help me stay away from it. Thanx

Love Ya
*Casondra

Ok I didn't plan on reading all these poems and damn sure didn't plan on commenting on them all but I can't help it they are so good!!! You are truly talented!! Keep it up!

wo0ah crzy!! but good poem

i dont know how i could give you a comment, i dont know what to say...hm, i really liked it...it rhymed well, dont always worry about rhyming though...that was very good

If this is true, and your dealing with that......LAY IT DOWN, I had to. Its either that or death. You choose.

i'm not a recovering drug addict, but yes, i have had my fair share of experiences... good poem, nice desrciptions...

I am a recovering coke addict!! haha and all this stuff is true.. i couldnt quit chasing the the first high even though i never got it back

Wowwwwwwwww awesome piece and yes
i am in recovery 5/5

This shit is true but every corner ya turn 2 theres drugs, its just ow much will power ya got 2 say NO!! realistic poem-like it!

Ive nevr tried drugs ... so i would kno how it feels ... bt you've got talent ... i liked it

Okay so the poem was great and the message was clear i have done coke but never been addicted but i knowmad people that have been and ive seen the shit it dose to people i lost my mom over that shit she aint dead just a crack head and it turns you into sometimg you never wanted to be somting you cant control