This poem was good. i really liked it
the use of the quote really added a lot to the poem and i loved the whole second part
She had to go
She had to leave...
You broke me when you set me free
A vow I made that I'll always be...
But this I never promised thee,
I'll drown myself in misery
Flood myself in tears...
something about the rhyme and flow of it was just great
good job
5/5
=D

''Even though our song has ended,our melody still plays..
Even though we're not who we use to be, our love is our safe shore that will bring you back to me''
^^ I love these lines!!! They blew me away!
A really good poem, I enjoyed every word!

Hugs,

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