In the poems ive read of yours, i sense ALOT of surpressed anger and even more hurt. you have an amazing way with words. once again, great job

Wow, this poem is very different but cool. I loved reading it. makes me think of an old relationship i had had.
Good job
5/5

This poem is sad, it fits the sad poems section more than the friendship poems one. I liked the choosing of words which made the idea stronger. The rhymes were good and the flow was fine. Good work 5/5

My favorite two stanzas in this were the thrird and forth ones, because they flowed well, and had good rhyme, but also because of the second lines in both of them, which I felt were both equally well written.

Brad