Justification! Why?

by vaibhav shah   Apr 12, 2008


You say
I must justify
What I deserve
I must clarify
What I argue
I must verify
What I detect
I must defy
What I dislike
I must rectify
What I err
But why?
Is it a compulsion
Or merely a proposition
For nobody likes
These bloody suggestions
Which appear to them
Only and only coercion
My life is not
A property of others
I will do only
What I like
What I love
What I feel
And what I think
You have no need to grumble
Please try to become humble
Improve your own disposition
And leave me to my own confusion.

12-4-2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Simply marvelous description.... Truly love the style! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is a very good, angry and amazing poem. So much feeling...and...just amazing! Very good! You are getting very good at expressing feelings! The only thing I have to say is this:

    'You have no need to grumble
    Please try to become humble'

    these lines kind of worry me, I see that you wanted it to rhyme--but take care not to do it at the expense of a poem. As of now, I have no idea on what you can do to fix it, other than take it out, but if I have an idea I'll contact you.
    Very good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    You have put it perfectly... Awsume... Simply awsume one can say... From 007

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