Wow. thats really good. as a 15 year old, its pretty advanced, but as a poet, it speaks volumes of unproclaimed truths...very nice job

Whoa, this poem is written amazingly. Great job and keep up the good work.
5/5

I since a hint of compassion and anger mixed. Also the pain is so clear. What is really ironic is that you give the reader a since of self shame on top of it all. Not alot..just a hint.

The emotions that are in this poem makes it very effective. The hardest thing I have ever seen is a writer portraying more than two emotions at a time. Normally there is anger that is screaming out while a hint of pain; however, you have shown alot more and it came out beautifully.

It almost felt as if I was in the room with you and could see these emotions dancing around bitterly in your eyes.

What can I say other the AWESOME!

~~Sher

Another good piece, not 'fantastic!', but good. I don't have a favorite stanza, but I do have a favorite line, which is the second line, of the second stanza. I liked this line, mainly because out the rhyme, and the way it was structured, but also for the power behind the words.