by laura jones Apr 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I realized I liked you when I fell asleep with you on my mind |
by MissMeg
This poem is beautifully written, i think u did a very good jjob with it. It was short, yet veryheartfelt. Keep it up. |
by Bekka Smekka
I love this poem!! simple and sweet!! a bit short so you might want to make it longer, and the rythm of rhyming wasn't consistent but well done!! |