Lightning

by Lexi Lou   May 24, 2004


I want to die
i wish lighting would strike
there nothing to live for
nothing to like

i want to die
i hate my life
I'm to afraid of pain
to pick up the beautiful knife

i cant do that
to the people who fool themselves
the people that think
they love someone else

I'm alive because i love him
but the futures looking dim

i want to die
brace me up somewhere new
take me
there's nothing left to do

take this failure
to a place where i belong
where jerks and loser all habitat
it shouldn't be this long

no one wants a long cruel death
so why am i living it?
don't make me suffer
all it takes is one hit

don't make me do it myself
please just let it be done
I'm still a joke
the never ending pun

one lightning bolt
thats all it takes
i cant hurt myself
so do it before i break

Lexi Lou

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  • 20 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    thank you all but i am not going to kill myself i just felt like dying but wasnt going to do anything about it
    funny chris how you say that but just make things worse isnt it?
    lexi lou

  • 20 years ago

    by paddy

    hi hun,
    firstly i'd like to thank you on you'r lovely comments on my poems much appricated,
    secondly you'r a extreamly gifted writer who has so much to give,
    i tried to kill myself when i lost the only person i ever really loved,
    i'm glad i didn''t achive what i set out to do on that day i might of been ending my pain but i'd have been causeing so much more pain,
    theres always a way out the easy way or the hard way the easy way is death suicide what ever you want to call it it's all the same the hard way is to pick you'r self up and carry on yes it's very hard but you can and will do it,
    you'r a beautiful person with so much to live for,
    never give up carry on with you'r amazeing poetry and if you ever need to talk just e mail me
    i gave you a 5
    take care my friend
    lorna
    xxx