I like the title , but I wish it said Is This Real Love . It makes more sense , I guess . But be prepared , I comment as I read each stanza and am capable of changing my mind . So yeah , here it goes . . .

First stanza : I love the opening line . Wow . And the imagry only becomes more powerful as the lines continue . One thing that takes away from the piece , is the lack of capitalization . That is one of my pet peeves so yeah . Overall , a great first stanza .

Second : Well , I would of liked the first line if you didn ' t use the & sign . Idk . Hmm . Oh and I think you meant you ' ll never meet another girl . I really liked this stanza though -- The storyline behind it as well as the whole piece so far , is great .

Third : I love the opening line . Aww . Lol . Jk . But I did love the line . Normally , I would not of liked the word kiddo but it worked nicely considering the tone of this piece . I think you meant rainbows in the third line . I like this stanza . Longer than the others and it had more of a poetic note to it . Your flow was smooth for the most part .

Last : I like the old saying being tied in with this one . But I am not sure if you spelled fishy right . Lol . It ' s okay though , spelling is not everyones thing . I liked the way you summed up the piece .

Overall , a great piece . A couple errors but nothing too bad . Great job hun . 4 . 5

Amber .

Another wonderful write from a great poet. The flow was excellent, and I loved your choice of words, you are very talented. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe