This poem is exellent it is so true aswell, its nice to see that someone thinks about these things and you can tell by the way you wote your poem that it saddens you. i no i will defenatly look twice next time a see a homeless person. xx 5/5

The thing i like most about this poem is the message behind it, thats very typical and happens most of the time, i thinks people should kinda accepted them well and help them start a life. Good work

The thing i like most about this poem is the message behind it, thats very typical and happens most of the time, i thinks people should kinda accepted them well and help them start a life. Good work

Amazing poem Amber, one of your best i'd say. The message it conveys is incredibly true, we're all blinded by our egos at times not knowing that a few dollars could save one's life.

Great job keep it up, you're amazing!

Love Hieu