Rambling

by StandStill   Apr 12, 2008


Out of your box
but surrounded by lines
Two dimensional life
with little words that shine

Video tapes that go forward
but never go back
a poet's frustrated mind
constantly under friendly fire's attack

Loaded guns
and puzzle's pieces
the words keep flowing
pain never ceases

But pain is a feeling
and feeling is time
Time is living
must mean i'm alive

and aloneness is different
not bad, not quite good
perhaps, one of these days i'll find a heart
that beats like it should

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    And aloneness is different
    not bad, not quite good
    perhaps, one of these days i'll find a heart
    that beats like it should

    This is soooooooooooooo good.......we all look for that day.......but alass, that day never seems to come.......Great work sweetie....5/5.....you never cease to amaze me......xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    But pain is a feeling
    and feeling is time
    Time is living
    must mean i'm alive

    i like that stanza,,,, TREASURE HUNT

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