Comments : Rambling

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    But pain is a feeling
    and feeling is time
    Time is living
    must mean i'm alive

    i like that stanza,,,, TREASURE HUNT

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    And aloneness is different
    not bad, not quite good
    perhaps, one of these days i'll find a heart
    that beats like it should

    This is soooooooooooooo good.......we all look for that day.......but alass, that day never seems to come.......Great work sweetie....5/5.....you never cease to amaze me......xoxo