With pounding heart and trembling hands he "adjusts " himself and types, Erika, that was well worth the wait!!!!!!

10/10

WOW!!! this is going on my fave list of poems!!! I loved it!! 5/5!!! great job.

Wow!! Man that was really good. I have to put it on my favorite list.

Kick ASS! I wish I could write something just likwe this 5/5

Nice

Uhm it confused me a lil but i think it was pretty diff...(good) ........nice job

That poem rox for real! It is A W E S O M E

Very good, its nice too that you broke it up in little paragraphes it makes it easyer to read and the only ones i do read, GOOD POEM THO

This people as awesome, very well done... My face is flushed from reading it! Your words painted a picture in my mind. 5/5

I can't stop reading this....and imagining! Mmmmm 5/5

Okay, just another comment on your already busy cooment page. You are unique in your writing and your experiences. Thank you for allowing me to experience these things through you. My curiousity is satisfied.

Damn...your descriptions are so vivid,I love the dark feel in it, am I correct in assuming that the character is being involved in an orgy...? Wow, now I wish my man was here so he could solve the problems you've caused :-P