Emotions collide

by xXxUNOxXx   Apr 12, 2008


Your mad at me; I'm mad at you
neither of us know what to do
Should we laugh or should we cry?
I don't want to say good-bye
Your my mentor and my best friend
I'll stick with you till the very end
For you, I'll do anything
You make me want to stand up and sing
I feel so happy to hear a knock on my door
Then my emotions soon hit the floor
Without you all I do is cry
I sit in my room and weep and sigh
Soon I hear another knowck on my door
My head is black and I don't know what to say
You say "i'm soory for being such a jerk."
I say "No matter what we'll make this friendship work."
We end the day with a joke you crack
Thank you god for giving me my friend back.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Coffee Loves Nachos

    5/5.. It shows that every one gets into fights with their friends but in the end they just make up and become friends again.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    That was really good. I love the ending in this piece. I think to improve this poem you should add more punctuations so that there's a pause so the reader can linger on your feelings more.

    Anyway great job on this one. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awww..that's cute and sweet of you lol