Comments : Emotions collide

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awww..that's cute and sweet of you lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    That was really good. I love the ending in this piece. I think to improve this poem you should add more punctuations so that there's a pause so the reader can linger on your feelings more.

    Anyway great job on this one. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Coffee Loves Nachos

    5/5.. It shows that every one gets into fights with their friends but in the end they just make up and become friends again.