Beautifuly written and 100% true! really loved it! keep it up! =D
god bless
becca xXx

I like how it keeps on a specific track and pace, it makes it more enjoyable to read

Your Servant:
David Johnson

Hey this was a good poem. Ya I know its hard to believe it, but we'll be there one day. good poem. keep writing. ~Spiker_03~

Hey this was a good poem. Ya I know its hard to believe it, but we'll be there one day. good poem. keep writing. ~Spiker_03~

Heaven sounds like the place i wanna be right now. :) i think in some form heaven could be found here on earth if everyone simply loved. such a natural easy concept to understand yet the most difficult thing to accept.