Very good, really stonrg and powerful and great choice of title too, well done keep writing xxxxxx

Rado,
This is a very deep write, the intesity of the words as I read them washed over me and I could feel your emotions...

'No one knows complete, heartbreaking loneliness
Until they are completely alone with no one to turn too
Until their hearts turn to cold,hard ice, just to be free of pain
Until they manage to completely numb their emotions
So that they can not be sad, but they can not be happy'

^ this stanza really stood out to me, the emotions, the simplicity of the words.. It was all so powerful and mind gripping.

'She wants some one to help her feel again, to help her live
But no one is there, no one is coming, no one will ever help her
And no one is listening to the little girl lost in a cold, cruel world'

^ This was and excellent conclusion, devastating in the reality. However to that 'Lost Little Girl in A Cold Cruel World'
Sometimes it seems all hope is lost.. that no one cares and no one will save you. That your case is lost and someone should just kill you now and save you the pain of a long slow death... But, their is always someone that cares... the affection just isn't always in plain sight. Often when people feel alone, really they are surrounded by friends just standing on the sideline waiting to pull you out...And That lost girl, is really only lost to herself... there is someone that knows your path and is just waiting to pick you up when you stumble, or turn you around when you take a wrong turn.. Someone will always be their to guide you.

This piece was mind blowing, in the sense of how much you have improved in your writting.
Excellent Write Hun.
5/5--Evy[Paula]