Rain

by Amber   Apr 13, 2008


Pitter patter is the sound
I hear when the tiny droplets
reaches the earth, they seem to
relieve all their anger and anguish
when they drop their pound
on the rough, thirsty ground.
The sound of the pittering
and pattering is so relaxing
as you notice all the animals
seem to be asleep or maybe
staring in awe at how such
small little droplets of rain
can help the earth to gain
it's thirst or how those
tiny droplets seem to
make such big noises
at times. Slowly though
the pittering and pattering
of the rain will stop, leaving
the earth and animals hungry
for more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    Kinda told a story from my point of view....which is perfect in a form like this...great write...^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Texastar

    Awesome poem Amber! 5/5 you did a great job on rhyming!

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven

    Your nature poem came out to be really good, I love it, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I love when people take a second and appreciate nature : ) 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven

    This poem is one of a kind, I'll keep you in my favorites, 100/100