This is well described, actually what really happens when its raining. In some places the flow got abit off but generally, Nice work

This is very good.keep it up
**harlea

This poem is one of a kind, I'll keep you in my favorites, 100/100

I love when people take a second and appreciate nature : ) 5/5 <33

Your nature poem came out to be really good, I love it, keep it up!

Awesome poem Amber! 5/5 you did a great job on rhyming!

Kinda told a story from my point of view....which is perfect in a form like this...great write...^_^