Kiki i loved this and i know this is true for you did do this and have no shame but its ok we all get through it..and well get through it together...! but it was really good and it had a great story and meaning to it..i guess that means the same thing but oh well

Its so nice , U have also cared for rythm , so nice
I wanna dedicate you a verse of one of my poems which has same meaning as this poem though

Why it gives pain alot
When someone we love lie

5/5
Cheers
Biya