Comments : When she's alright

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    You are right ... only when one steps in someones shoes someone can understand there is more than a storm hidden behind the outer calm..... Marvellous thinking

  • 16 years ago

    by TeXAmoXGummieX

    Nice poem you always have secrets you have to hide trust me i fell like im that little girl 5/5 nice poem keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by DiNa

    I love your poem. every body has secrets they hide and i can relate to that.

  • 16 years ago

    by laura jones

    I love this poem so true .. p.s thankyou for the comment i have finished it now i didnt realize id get comments so soon only joined yesterday so that why it was unfinished .. much love xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!..good job on this!
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    True feelings are expressed...all girls feel it...good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Naw... This poem is so sad, almost made me cry. Naw I love this poem, keep writing kay?
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    That poem is so me!
    well written!
    love it!
    xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose

    I read you loud and clear there girl. Nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really good poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by meghan

    I like this poem alot, it's really good. Keep writing. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by unspokken

    I loved this poem; it even gave me the chills. I tink that it was ver well thought of, and it is very deep. I loved it. And just to let you know I think that everyone in life has at lease one day when they cant find their smile, and just wants to be loved. Just like the way I am feeling now. This poem matchs me so much. Loved it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, you're good. :3

  • 16 years ago

    by Cuttie

    OMG... very nice... i loved it.. so much emotions...

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    I love this poem!!! great job gurl!!! i give it a 5/5!!! XD

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I love his poem you put your words very well good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasma

    Awww =[ this was said but very wll done.
    5/5 Keep it up !! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveOfMyLife

    Loved it... sounded like it could be a song... you should become a song writter lol... but no i loved this poem it was amasing.. and thanx for the comment... i never really realised their were many people who have gone thro what i wrote about in that poem "i will never forget" it was really hard for me to write and i think i've cried almost everytime i read it... even tho it happend like 3 years ago i still havent forgiven him for it.. and i donnt think i ever could.. so thanx. ttyl<3 Terra

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Yeah i got u about the rhyme thing, i just didnt think my poem had rhythm...this is a good poem, it could also be a song...which poetry and songs are very similiar. but also different lets see ur poem had

    a first verse

    a chorus

    a second verse

    the chorus again

    a bridge

    and then the end where it kinda sums up the song..
    i like it ^-^

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Cos that little girl
    she's not alright, she's not alright

    we all hide a pain in a smile , a friend in here told me soomething , a smile is like a band aid it cover the pain but it still hurt inside

    love this poem 5/5