You are right ... only when one steps in someones shoes someone can understand there is more than a storm hidden behind the outer calm..... Marvellous thinking |
by TeXAmoXGummieX
Nice poem you always have secrets you have to hide trust me i fell like im that little girl 5/5 nice poem keep writing |
by DiNa
I love your poem. every body has secrets they hide and i can relate to that. |
by laura jones
I love this poem so true .. p.s thankyou for the comment i have finished it now i didnt realize id get comments so soon only joined yesterday so that why it was unfinished .. much love xx |
by Unamed
Aww!..good job on this! |
True feelings are expressed...all girls feel it...good job |
by Lemonbread
Naw... This poem is so sad, almost made me cry. Naw I love this poem, keep writing kay? |
That poem is so me! |
by Rose
I read you loud and clear there girl. Nice work! |
by amandalynn
Really good poem. 5/5 |
by meghan
I like this poem alot, it's really good. Keep writing. :) |
by unspokken
I loved this poem; it even gave me the chills. I tink that it was ver well thought of, and it is very deep. I loved it. And just to let you know I think that everyone in life has at lease one day when they cant find their smile, and just wants to be loved. Just like the way I am feeling now. This poem matchs me so much. Loved it. :) |
by Em
Wow, you're good. :3 |
by Cuttie
OMG... very nice... i loved it.. so much emotions... |
by Grace
I love this poem!!! great job gurl!!! i give it a 5/5!!! XD |
I love his poem you put your words very well good job 5/5 |
by Phantasma
Awww =[ this was said but very wll done. |
by LoveOfMyLife
Loved it... sounded like it could be a song... you should become a song writter lol... but no i loved this poem it was amasing.. and thanx for the comment... i never really realised their were many people who have gone thro what i wrote about in that poem "i will never forget" it was really hard for me to write and i think i've cried almost everytime i read it... even tho it happend like 3 years ago i still havent forgiven him for it.. and i donnt think i ever could.. so thanx. ttyl<3 Terra |
by Jenna
Yeah i got u about the rhyme thing, i just didnt think my poem had rhythm...this is a good poem, it could also be a song...which poetry and songs are very similiar. but also different lets see ur poem had |
by Mister 47
Cos that little girl |