This was such a sad poem... but so true. so much emotion is in this particular one. and i love it. 5/5

much love,
mac.<3

Very nice poem!!!

Amazing write....so sad all the hidden things...then she lets go-even if it was in dying,she was finally comfortable..happy. Great job

Very nice =)

I think this poem is great, hidding what we feel seems most of the time like the only way of being a part of something, maybe being acceptted, i hav learn to hide my feelings, maybe cuz i think they belong to us or maybe cuz i hate looking weak...well tha things is that i love it...and thankz a lot for the comment... :)

Very clever, very emotive and most of all-very true.
You are a beautiful writer who writes from the heart,
keep writing
Aish

Omgosh, , So Many Girls Can Relate To This. . Its Like You Meant To Write For Each Girl That Reads This. . You're Talent Is Amazing. . Keep It Up! ! 5/5

I think this is one of those really sad poems, that for alot of people, it will hit home. You know what i mean? Like alot of people will relate, and i think thats an excellent thing, being able to write things that can mean something, to someone out there. But yeh, Amazing. keep it up! 5/5

So many of us little girls feel like this, 5/5. Em