Comments : A little girls dream

  • 16 years ago

    by Coldstone

    Nice poem! i like the 2nd stanza the most! Good work:)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Aww I love my mom to death!
    I would be nothing without her..I loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by ReapersPuppy

    Wow awesome poem! this poem so sweet & I just adore it..My mom passed away & I dont know why but this poem kind of reminds me of how I feel..

  • 16 years ago

    by MiSSQUEENx3

    Awww.
    this poem is soo cute.
    && very sad.
    ;[
    your a good writer!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Awwww.....i liked it alot...... this was really good

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    TOTTALY AWESOME!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Donjeta Mejtani

    A great jobe.
    I really like this poem
    XXx

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Wondeful images,sad story behind the dream

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Ballerina

    Wow that was truly beautiful....very touching

    ~love Always Jess~

  • 16 years ago

    by DiNa

    Your so brave for putting all of this out
    great job

  • 16 years ago

    by trinity

    I like this poems plot it almost makes you want to cry

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Love it keep up your great talent (^_^)

  • 15 years ago

    by Annie aka shadow

    I like this poems its a good one

    annie

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    So sad. 5/5, Em