Ravenous

Nice...great poem, keep up the good work. (^_^)

Very interesting title. That made me read this poem. In short you've described very strong emotions of life. Hunger... pain... suffering...
strong words and well penned.

This paints a picture of pure desperation and agony, you chose very good words

((psh! only 1 comment!!! what's up with THAT?! ^.^))

i really liked it...we just studied the holocaust in my english class..and that's what it made me think of. the suffering and longing...how easily the nazis were able to turn them into animals who only thought of food...

amazing haiku, sherry. 5/5

So short and strong, well done