There is so much rhythm in this poem andd it flowed so well. The emotion was great and good use of your word choice. It all just made sense! good job!

" Every letter of every word, every smile that rocks my world " thats a really nice statement, it really caught my eye, i really like the way your poems flow, really nice. You got talent miss, keep it up

" Every letter of every word, every smile that rocks my world " thats a really nice statement, it really caught my eye, i really like the way your poems flow, really nice. You got talent miss, keep it up

" Every letter of every word, every smile that rocks my world " thats a really nice statement, it really caught my eye, i really like the way your poems flow, really nice. You got talent miss, keep it up

This is gorgeous. it really is. the person you wrote this about must be very special to you, as i feel your words are coming from your heart. the best words always do come from the heart.
nice use of rhyme.
5/5