Perfect Harmony (Collab)

by Italian Stallion   Apr 13, 2008


A vivid blue sky,
Wind calm as can be.
The sun's beating down
Against you and me.

The kids are all playing
In the hot soft sand,
While the waves are breaking
Creating a beautiful song.

Birds continue chirping,
Perfect harmony,
As though to sing a melody
Created just for you and me.

Time briefly frozen,
As our memories are etched.
Embedded forever,
Carved in our beating chest.

My prayers have been answered,
There is nothing more to want.
Your love will continue
To forever carry me on.

© Copyright 2008 By: Italian Stallion and Sherry Lynn

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Collaboration with Sherry Lynn

Sherry Lynn: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=41444
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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Hmmm...
    There's not much to say that hasn't been said.

    It seemed simple enough in all forms without being poorly done.

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I like wanna get married now lol im gonna go live out this gr8 write guys

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    What a wonderful coolab! I really enjoyed this piece and the words just flowed once I was able to sit and type without any interruptions.

    You are def. a talented poet and one that I would love to write another collab with any day of the week.

    ~~Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh, wow...

    This is truly breathtaking, I really can't express how much I enjoyed in every line. This is one of the most beautiful love poem I've read in a while, filled with endless beauty some outstanding greatness.

    I like the imagery that you two portrayed: Everything seem simply said yet perfectly picked words in every stanza form amazing, vivid images that flooded my mind.

    The whole atmosphere of this poem is captivating and each stanza touched me and almost brought tears to my eyes.

    Excellently written from the beginning to the end.

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