Edit:
There was very little to edit. I only questioned the last two lines actually.
A minds eye can be all knowing
Be forewarned, the seeds your sowing
Since you're saying the mind HAS eyes implying ownership I believe there should be an apostrophe.
the seeds you're sowing. Not your.
Other than that, another A plus from me. Brilliant work. Great vocabulary as per usual and the subject, along with the title, were perfect for you to work with. Overall, this deserves a five.