This is my favorite piece from you that I've read by now. Every line posses powerful images and effective, captivating atmosphere.
I could really feel the pain and anguish that you amazingly portrayed here and that left me in awe.
The whole poem holds so many emotions and originality and it is truly written in a great way.

- They have left me alone with black and red.
The red of the blood, and black of the dead.
These two colors have become infused with my very soul.-
^^^
I like these lines, especially the flow and vividly expressed emotions within them.

5/5 from me

Very Passionate, Touching poem.

The hole that once held my pride and my heart.
But it's dead now, lying on the floor, ripped apart.

It seems to put many feelings into words that many people wouldn't be able to explain.

excellent job,
SheDevil

Awesome poem. Filled with deep emotions yet again, and a wonderful rhyme scheme that continued throughout the entirety of the poem. Great work. 5/5.