I liked this thought I do think that you should take the aways out of this. It would give the poem much more meaning and understanding just think about it but If you dont Its ok cause It came from your heart

WoW! a very powerful poem here. the flow was amazing. the words were just right here. i can understand kinda. in my mind thatz how i feel for this person that i hate. but it just weird. sad and dark. i really like it. Please do keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy