That was a great poem. you captured alot of emotion into it. thats really good. its really hard to capture that much emotion but you did it.

Well well done
u are quite amazing when it comes to writing
fantastic stuff
good emotion
ur peoms hook everyone. ye i love ur poems

Great job, rly! way to go vayjayjay.

Beautifully done..sad and very touching..

God Job..

Wow! this is full of emotions.great job!5/5
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