Happy Birthday Darling

Woooooow! this is touchy wat a great work man!!keep on doing the best...

I liked the tone of this piece especially, and how the title suggests a different poem than one would expect. Obviously I also liked the basics - words, rhymes, etc, etc.

Brad

This poem is written simply and streight. I liked the rhymes, although the first stanza didn't have any in the first two lines. The choosing of words is nice although the rhymes seemed forced. Try doing better next time 4/5

The heartache that one can feel is purely wrenching.

When a couple has grown seperated while being together the only thing one can ask is how? But..you have answered that question for the readers who have never walked in those sadden footsteps.

Honestly, I don't know whether to cry or to give you a hug and let you cry... hey we will both cry if that is what the heart desires.

Another fantastically penned poem my dear.

~~Sher