by Sherry Lynn
The heartache that one can feel is purely wrenching. |
by Shinobi
This poem is written simply and streight. I liked the rhymes, although the first stanza didn't have any in the first two lines. The choosing of words is nice although the rhymes seemed forced. Try doing better next time 4/5 |
I liked the tone of this piece especially, and how the title suggests a different poem than one would expect. Obviously I also liked the basics - words, rhymes, etc, etc. |
by luxen
Woooooow! this is touchy wat a great work man!!keep on doing the best... |